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Colleges and schools are institutio­n for education. It helps in educating people and lessens their ignorance. Students should take that seriously to exist with the largest benefits. Mixing girls and boys in these places has its bad sides which is sure to end in horrible results concerning the religion and the morals of the students. Mixing colleges and schools help a lot in destroying the reserves between girls and boys and in changing their moods and morals. Girls started to lose their shyness from the long hours that they pass with the boys. They started to acquire some qualities that belong to boys such as: the loud voice. They also imitate boys in their clothes and hairs so one could not know the difference from a remote place. On the contrary, some boys acquire the thin voices of the girls and the excessive concern of themselves. Islam had organized all what concern the relation between women and men. It controls this relation in marriage and banned adultery and all what leads to it; looking, touching, wearing tight clothes for girls and so on. Some girls by the time forgetting that they came to educate and put instead all their concern in becoming beautiful to be admired by the boys. In order not to have such things colleges should be separate; having one for boys and other for girls. To destroy the corruption resulted from that mixing, it will be much better to separate between them. In conclusion, mixing appears to have many bad sides which lead some writers to call for separating boys from girls in order to have high marks and good education.
bahasa: Inggris   Pengetahuan bahasa: Penutur asli, Kecakapan


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Colleges and schools are institutio­ns helping to educate people and give them knowledge. To take the best of it, students should consider it seriously. The co-educationa­l system has its drawbacks that certainly have a negative impact on a student, especially on the religious and moral developmen­t. Coed colleges and schools bridge the gap that is usually found among girls and boys by changing their behaviours and morals. Girls started to lose their shyness due to long hours spent with boys. They started to imitate some boys' attributes, such as speaking loudly. They also imitated boys in their clothing and hairstyle so as to make it impossible to differenti­ate them from a distance. On the contrary, some boys adopt a more feminine way of speaking and show excessive concern for themselves. Islam has played an active role in governing the relationsh­ips between men and women. It governs marriage and has banned adultery and anything which may lead to it: looking, touching, wearing tight clothes for girls etc... Some girls, forgetting that they came to receive an education, set their heart on being beautiful so as to be admired by boys. In order to prevent such things to occur, colleges should have separate institutio­ns for boys and girls. To bypass the negative impact of the coed system, it would be much better to separate the two sexes. To conclude, the coeducatio­nal system has a negative impact which has led some writers to call for a separation of boys and girls within education to facilitate better academic results.

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