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I agree with meaning that parents might say their opinion about everything, but they should to remember, that them “baby” also has their position in any situation. In my opinion, this quote can help our parents to understand us. For example, father Ellie Stevenson, the main character of the book “A dream do come true”, forbade her to being a singer. It was an Ellie`s goal and, actually, she was a very upset, when her father prohibited her to go to the Glastonbur­y Festival. Relations between Ellie and Dad became terrible. Only Liz, her stepmother, could hear her soul. In my view, relationsh­ips with parents should be trusting. In my family, I get on with my father, because he support interests and hobbies, although we live in different towns. As for my mom, she is very busy person. I think, we have a bad relations because we rarely talk about it. On the other hand, parents ought to be more sensible than their child and give to useful advises to them. In conclusion, I want to say, that kid is very sensitive organism, who believe in happy life and his parents ought to protect him from irreparabl­e mistakes.
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sophihia:  Hello! Do you think this essay is normal ?

Ayazzz:  My level of English is medium but your text is captivating. Especially your arguments is interesting. I wish you more progress .



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